my letter to code masters racing studio

Dear Codemasters  i am applying to work as a senior designer for one of your games that are in production. i choose this job as the detail of the job is very clear and interesting to the games i prefer and i am very skilled at designing. http://www.gamesrecruit.co.uk/JobDetail.aspx?id=13680

To Adrian Brown

Hello i have chosen to apply for your recruitment which i saw on www.gamesrecruit.co.uk my experience in work is that i have been working as a admin in a consultancy/recruitment agency based in llandfairfechan called Start I.T for almost 10 months and have decided to apply for the job of senior designer. i do not have the required 3 years experience however if you let me have a chance witha  possible week i will gladly show you my experience in work if given the chance. I am a very good worker as my previous job has appraised me and have told me on more than a certain occasion that i am doing a good job. Although shy i have helped people in the work place when they are given issues to deal with. Thank you for taking your time to read my letter and will be waiting for the reply.

Dex Berrow